I agree with the above along with maybe a little better intro, something along these lines.......
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d7z_nGhcV_I
I've said this before about that clip; the intro is awsome because the song is set up for that type of intro. But the rest of it doesn't show much ability at all because all of that video is already edited by THC so to just throw a transission between the clips is now that impressive.
I love that intro its cool original and just flows-shows some editing abilities. Maybe a better song as well-Have you heard of the Flobots songs called handlebars i think it would go well too not over the top but still has some beat it would keep every one happy.
Too late to change it now!
One other side note that might give you the edge would be to catogorize the shots-like deep pow shots, crashes, sidehilling, jumping and than your crash into the treee.
Just some food for thought. I liked the film so far and best of luck with the competition.
The catagory thing is interesting because That's how I stated but on the old forum I got an overwelming response to mix it up instead?