Would appreciate your feedback, does this say go or no?

[snowmoherb]

Personally, I would leave the words shred and destroy. You aren't trying to market to greenies here. The people you are trying to sell to do use those words and won't be offended by them.

I also like the tabs at the bottom. Who the heck cares if senile... I mean, senior citizens can read them? Again, is that your customer? no!

Cheers!

Herb

 

[Jorli]

I'm sort of tending to agree with you, those are words we commonly use to describe riding and Greenies aren't my clients...I'm actually pretty green in many regards that hopefully aren't too hypocritical as I certainly value and appreciate our environment - I would hope most people get the point of what is being said. We also aren't soliciting customers that are completely clueless, if someone can't find their way around the website, I'm a little scared of how they might handle our mountains.

If someone has better words to replace Shred and Destroy that still sounds kind of cool, please let me know. -Slaying Pow, Murdering Pow, etc... Actually, shred and destroy kind seem tame compared to those options.

Cheers!-J

Personally, I would leave the words shred and destroy. You aren't trying to market to greenies here. The people you are trying to sell to do use those words and won't be offended by them.

I also like the tabs at the bottom. Who the heck cares if senile... I mean, senior citizens can read them? Again, is that your customer? no!

Cheers!

Herb

 

[snowmoherb]

-Slaying Pow, Murdering Pow, etc... Actually, shred and destroy kind seem tame compared to those options.

Cheers!-J

Agree!