I couldn't get the first one to load on my ipad, but i am assuming it was "snowmobiling....it's prettycool" that was on your channel. Anywho....the first one was good, i liked the music choice. The music could have been a little lower as to hear just a little more engine- if that is possible. The editing was pretty good. I love the slow mo stuff then spped it up. Although, i think you held the slow mo a bit too long on the cord pull and you should have shown the rest of the jump off the sled in real time.
The second video was great also. Shows a little more lifestyle side. Add in a little of the trip getting to west, some dinking around antics around the lodge. Add some pranks. Add in a little beach type music toward the end and buds laughing and you have youself a good lifestyle portion to your movie.
Before yur lifestyle portion, keep adding footage, get a couple of segments in there. Add in some buddy intros in between segments in lifestyle fashoin. After all segments are finished roll some credits and cut in your stucks and current lifestyle portion you have. Send it off with that beach type music ( raggae, freddie kalbErmatten, jack johnson, Or some kind of meloncholic it is over but it was fun and we will be back to do it again type music) tied in with some definign moment of your trip and your buddies and who you guys are. Now you have a kick *** movie.
Anyway, that might be a bit more than what you were looking for, but you seem pretty decent at editing and i think you can put together a movie i would appreciate as a veiwer. I would be interested in what you could edit together for a longer (anywhere from 15-45 min) movie. Keep it up and with a few tweaks and refinements you got yourself some good ****.
Forgive spelling and punctuation this is typed on the silly ipad with thumbs.
the tether thing was hilarious
